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When the world becomes too much
When it closes in
Run away with me
There's a private place, where it's only us and the sky
Under the blanket of stars we'll find company
To release our thoughts to the night
Watching each fade away to a pinpoint of light
Before you lose perspective
Before you lose sight
Let me bring you here
Let's just forget what bothers us
Let's just forget the world
Because here there's just you and I
Just you, and me, and the sky
And when we lay here and pass the time
When we let this silence clear our minds
The nothingness that's left is more than this
It's us
It's bliss
This was inspired by this ongoing conversation with :icondeadlyfoxassassin: She brought up something that meant a lot to me. And this is what became of it.
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Turihia's avatar
I like this. a lot. I like how it seems that you're trying to save your partner from becoming jaded or from becoming cynical. To me, it is as if you're trying to sustain the magic in her.....I don't know if I am making sense so I am going to shut up now.

anyways, you get a star from me!